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Harry Potter (G)
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 10:27 AM
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This my first ever poem about harry potter,sorry if its not very good. Please give you replies.



Harry....born and bred an ordinary kid

Until the day he met hagrid

I remember well the auspicious day

For it was harrys eleventh birthday



Hogwarts now would be his home

Where for once he would not feel alone

Friends and fame would surround his path

He may not forget the year in which he felt Voldemorts wrath.



The years would pass and stronger he would grow

For he did know that his life was full of sorrow

The Prophecy had decided his fate

For all he could do now was wait...................

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This is a pretty good poem.

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That's a really good poem! Keep writing. I like the rymes and rythm of the poem it really flows good.


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Good job ! Just watch out for the rhyming a little, but overall, it flows very nicely !


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I like this poem too. It's short, to the point, and yet it shows amazing depth and, most importantly!, love of the characters involved.

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Its a nice poem you´ve got to be the first one ever!!! I hope to see more of your work, and how you will eventually evolve!


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That was great! I loved it! The rhyming and flow was brilliant! Keep on going!


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I like the last paragraph the best. well done for your first try. I look forward to seeing more!


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I totally agree its a good poem and i loved the rythem i thought it was good for a first try.




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It was very good. I think you did a great job for it being your first time. I like the ending, the last line, that tied in very well. Good job.


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That is a really good first attempt. It makes sence and puts things stright foreward. Well Done Very Happy

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