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Forums » Sirius Black Inspirations » Poetry » Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge *Winners Announced!*
Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge *Winners Announced!*
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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge *Winners Announced!*
Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 01:03 AM
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This is where you can post your questions about the Before And After Challenge! It's also the place to leave your reviews for G - PG-13 Poetry entries!

To post your Poetry entries click here for G-PG-13, or here for R/NC-17.

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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 08:05 PM
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*waves* I've got a poem ready to go, sort of. It's not completely original as it's a filk and I wanted to check before posting. I'll just place it my regular thread if it doesn't qualify for the challenge.


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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 11:12 PM
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That should be fine, Dexy! Any form is a-ok!


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 02:45 AM
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Dexy, Just gotta say, Thank sooo much for sticking that song in my head for the rest of eternity.

Other than that, it was terrific. I was laughing out loud, my husband had to come and see what was so funny. I don't think he gets it, but then again, he never really does. Thanks for the giggle.


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 02:02 PM
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Hahahaha!

OMG Dexy, that's brilliant! I can imagine the film-clip in my head!
*giggles*
Just brilliant Smile


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 06:31 PM
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Heehee, Dexy! It's hilarious! Thought if it werent for the song it'd be most creepy. Excelent job!


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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 06:32 PM
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Dexy, Just gotta say, Thank sooo much for sticking that song in my head for the rest of eternity.

I'll be happy to modify your memory! Lol, my hubby rarely gets my fangirlish giggles either.

Thanks Dragon, I'm really hoping this will replace that horrible fight in the MoM and that nasty veil.


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
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Hahah Dexy that was great! You know, I think that original song is pretty O_O also...have you ever realized how dirty it is? (And yes, I was obsessed with that song as a little girl, so I'm only starting to realize it now...)

Anyway, I was actually cracking up the whole time, Dexy. "Come on Bella cast your spella!" *giggles*

Now I'm slightly wary about posting the one I have in mind, because yours was so funny and catchy and mine's so...dark and dismal. Razz


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 03:35 PM
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YOu must post! All types of poetry are important and really, a dark dismal one would be truer to canon in every way.

Glad you liked mine though. Very Happy


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 03:39 PM
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/\ Haha, who needs canon? Wink

Dragon, great entry! I'm impressed by your Divination skills, I must say. Oh, and the description of Firenze was wonderful also. On cloud 9


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 04:22 PM
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Dragon, what a great visual poem. And you're probably right about them leaving that out of the movie.

Mara, You are killing me. *sticks fingers in ears* La la la, I can't hear you, he is not going to die. La la la!" (beautiful poem, though)


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 07:08 PM
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Awww, Mara, that's so tragic! I love it *sniff* I could really see that moment, very well done!

Dragon, I really enjoyed the rythm and specially the second stanza when Firenze starts to speak, I could feel I was there in class listening to him Very Happy


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 10:38 PM
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oh!
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
*cries*

Mara, that is so beautifully written! I could imagine every single part of it, and now I feel like crying!
Crying or Very sad

It flows so well, I just can't find fault with it...except...

*chants* It's not going to happen, it's not going to happen, it's not going to happen...
I don't want it to happen... Puppy eyes

Very well written!


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Post Post subject: Poetry Q&R: Before And After Challenge
Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 03:50 AM
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Ahhh let's not freak out here! *hyperventilates* Of course it's not going to happen!

(Thanks so much for the compliments! Very Happy )


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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 07:43 AM
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Wooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!

Molly - I absolutely adore your poem! The little personalities are delightfully good, and the rhythm is so bouncy and happy. It really made me smile and giggle!
The 'story' is just too cute - I like it muchly!

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