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Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
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Post Post subject: Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 03:10 AM
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Welcome to the I Would NEVER Forget Your Birthday! Fanfic and Poetry Challenge!!

August is Immeritus' birthday month, in case you didn't know. In the past, we have always done something in order to celebrate that birthday and while the site may be smaller than it once was, with no new books to discuss and no new Sirius antics to thrill us and whip us into fangirl/boy squeeage, we do still love this place and we do still love our Sirius. Immeritus has a special place in my heart and I would NEVER forget its birthday and I know you wouldn't either!

The Challenge

For this month's special birthday challenge, we would like you to revisit your favorite Sirius moment, from the books or movies, and rework it, expand upon it, or change it. We are hoping for more than just "Sirius dodges the Veil," here. For example, instead of hiding out in the cave, from GoF, maybe Sirius flitted about Hogsmeade, spent some time with Madame Rosemerta. Or perhaps you will explore some of the things that are mentioned but never actually seen in the books or movies, such as Sirius' and Crookshanks' conversations from PoA. Feel free to explore marauder-era happenings as well! Pranks on Snape, conversations with Remus, visits to detention with James. All we ask is that you mention the scene you are working with so that we can revisit that moment as well!

Revel in the Sirius love, though he is gone, he is not forgotten.

The Rules

All entries to the challenge must have the usual header information (Title, Author/ Poet, Rating, Warnings etc) at the top of your post. (Please refer to the Artistic Forum rules if in doubt.) You may not edit your entry/entries once posted so please make full use of the 'preview' facility and consider using a beta. You may enter the challenge as many times as you like.

The closing date is 25 August 2009.



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Post Post subject: Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 03:26 PM
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Title: The Time is Now
Rating: G
Pairings: James/Lily
Notes: I'm flying off for a whirlwind trip in a few hours, so I figured I'd better get something done before I go! *squee*
This is a little poem concerning the birth of the future Chosen One. Sirius gets a message from James... the time is now!
Constructive Criticism?: Always welcome!
Disclaimer: I do not own Sirius, James, or any of the awesome characters from the HP novels. I mean no harm by writing this - I do it only to celebrate the birthday of the bestest site EVAH!


The Time is Now

An owl flies with an urgent message
while a tabby cat skulks in the dim lamplight,
barely a sound ensues for several minutes - but then -
the roar of an engine thunders through the night.

With great purpose he soars over the rooftops;
his leather jacket zipped up and his jeans skin-tight;
his mouth set to a grimace as he rides hell-bent
on arriving before the slightest hint of daylight.

Over land and lake streams the man and motorbike;
mimicking a shooting star with the glowing headlight.
For endless months he’s been waiting for this moment,
unsure if it will bring shear terror or sweet delight.

Screeching to a halt in front of the house,
he runs to the door, knocking with all his might.
It opens – James is flushed and breathing hard,
and asks; “You’re going to be his Godfather, right?”

~Dragon


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Post Post subject: Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 08:05 PM
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Penname: Dexy
Title:He's at Hogwarts…
Characters: Sirius
Rating: PG
Notes: Prizoner of Azkaban is probably my favorite book of the series. The passages in the Shrieking Shack are hands down my favorite. Mostly because I was completely taken by surprise with the twists and I loved that. This poem is inspired by PoA Chapter 19--The Servant of Lord Voldemort:

Harry remembered what Mr. Weasley had told Mrs. Weasley. "The guards say he's been talking in his sleep…always the same words…'He's at Hogwarts.'"

"It was as if someone had lit a fire in my head, and the dementors couldn't destroy it….It wasn't a happy feeling.. it was an obsession…but it gave me strength, it cleared my mind."



Constructive Criticism/Comments: Yes, Please!
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, am not making money by playing with them, and hopefully am doing no harm.



He's at Hogwarts...




He's at Hogwarts…

rat…

he's at Hogwarts…

traitor…

he's at Hogwarts…

hiding…

he's at Hogwarts…

watching…

he's at Hogwarts…

with Harry...

he's at Hogwarts…

he's at Hogwarts…

he's at Hogwarts…




he will never leave.



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Post Post subject: Re: Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 06:48 PM
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Penname: Wings
Title: Not Afraid
Characters: Sirius, Harry from afar
Rating: G
Notes: Takes place in PoA when Sirius attends Harry's Quidditch match as a dog. This poem considers what Sirius might have been thinking (if he thought in verse--and I mean, who doesn't?)
Constructive Criticism/Comments: Much appreciated!
Disclaimer: JKR owns these characters and makes the big bucks, I in contrast, do neither.

Not Afraid

Not afraid to take off flying--
A metal scrap ‘tween air and me.
Not afraid to give up drinking,
Though I’d miss sweet fire whiskey.

Unconcerned for my own safety
In a swift duel to the death—
But when I see that lad roam lately,
I can barely catch my breath.

Once I thought I was invincible
When James enlisted me to care.
Since then has happened the unthinkable,
And I am left to bear

The burden of this child’s keep
Who could only think me vile;
Believing I betrayed his family,
The wizard world beguiled.

But when I see him soaring on his broom
‘Bove the crowd’s adoring sway,
As friend or father, dare I presume
He’d love me one distant day?

Harry! If you only knew
We two are bound in pain--
You’d hear my wasted plea as true…
My god, you fly like James!


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Post Post subject: Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:37 PM
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Title: The Night I Watched Rose Pedals Fall
Penname: Hewitt
Rating: PG
Pairings or Characters: Sirius and 2 girls. One whom he's snogging and one whom he is thinking about.
Warnings: Some minor lanuage
Notes: This takes place when Sirius is at Hogwarts 5th year up I'll let you choose which year to see it.
Constructive Criticism?: Yes and tell me what I can do to do better.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and his world do not belong to me. No money is being made. No harm is intended


The Night I Watched Rose Pedals Fall

A misted spring's night
All was steady and well
A terrible mistake was soon to come
One that would give me hell

The 3rd floor and the 4th room down
My common destination we would hide
Little did I know what was to approach that door
It was my ass she would soon chide

As we snogged in the room
It was not she who was on my mind
But that glowing red face whose brown curls bounced
And the one whose love made me blind

The more we snogged and groped
The memory flashed of when I held her hand
Her soft warm touch that made me fall for her
Was better than any one night stand

I was about to push us apart
Shaking my head in rejection
When the door opened with a bang
And there she was wide eyed and still with perfection

My heart sank as she paled so white
Not one rose danced in her cheek, not one at all
And that night I forever regretted was
The night I watched rose pedals fall


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Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 06:05 AM
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Pen name: Nero
Title: Living Death
Character(s): Sirius
Rating: PG
Notes: This poem tries to illustrate Sirius’ feelings during his stay at Grimmauld place, especially the time he spent alone. We catch a glimpse of lonely Sirius in OotP:

Sirius was hurrying towards them all, looking anxious. He was unshaven and still in his day clothes; there was also a slightly Mundungus-like whiff of stale drink about him.

constructive Criticism/Comments: Sure!
Acknowledgments: Thanks to cazzadragon and Dragon Klaw for Beta-ing and great constructive comments.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the world of Harry Potter, no money’s being made, and I don’t intend any harm!



Living Death

Living death…living death…
I have failed to fight my fate-
Don’t you know what that saith?!
That for lament it’s too late!
Sitting forever in the “ivory-tower”
‘tween what I sought to evade…
How much longer should I cower?
I’m tired of hiding as if I’m ‘fraid,
But things might soon start to change:
Voldemort dead, Harry’s life set to mend,
Even though it looks hard to arrange,
Someday this woe may come to end.
Living death… living death…
Life and death in one breath.


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Post Post subject: Immeritus Birthday 09 Challenge
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 05:23 AM
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