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Great! Very touching little log. Loved the fact that it started and ended with canon.

Love the idea of the flying-motorcycle-stunt-rider! Classic!

Gah you know I loved this one. So sad. Thinking about poor James and Lily being killed just makes me want to weep. Remus is of course lovely as sin in this; I just want to snuggle with him. (*backs off before Ruby thwacks me*)

It really is beautifully written and fits so perfectly in the moment that JKR created in this scene.

Ruby, this is beautiful. The memories are so sweet. I loved the matching Muggle leather jackets and I'm with Ribena on the whole motorcycle stunt thing.

Ruby very well written!!! It was so touching, that I wanted to give Remus a big hug. Its nice to read a story where Remus was around for the group talks (between James, Lily, and Sirius). Normally it's just the latter three. I also love how he had to step outside to "take a moment" You know it really makes sense and I could see JKR writing something just like this.
The detail is wonderful!
*waits to read another fice by the wonderful Ruby*
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God, it's so beautiful. I just wanted to kill Wormtail myself for all the pain he caused - you wrote pensive, melancholic Remus so well. Really great job Ruby! *hugs*

this peace is very very buitful almost cired when i read it

very well wrighten and i love how you bring in parts of the true story into it

well done

That was beautiful. I loved Sirius's line : "‘Or a flying-motorcycle-stunt-rider,’ interjected Sirius, dreamily. ‘I could teach him!’ It so clearly showed the good times the Marauders had together, and Remus's pain that now he is the only one left to take care of Harry. Thanks for the great read!